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  • Published 15 Jan 2024

Restaurant

I just finished with this project, took some time to complete this project, please tell me what you think and how I can improve on it, thank you! Nature_Try.png

yehonam
15 Jan 2024

2 Comments

loaferslodge

I think it is a very nice creation. There are however some problems with your lighting.

If it is a bright sunny day as suggested by the shadows on the path, your lighting on the wall with the welcome sign as well as in the pagoda is way to strong.

If you dial down the overhead lights so that the top of the wall just over the door is in as much shadow as the top wall with the Blender sign, I think it would look better.

The Blender sign itself should not be lit in broad daylight.

Your sun is also too bright. This is especially evident on the right side wall.

Tone it down and compensate with ambient light.

OR Give it a try with lighting the scene using HDRI.

Sorry if it sounds too negative. All in all. The light is the only thing I'd complain about :) Almost.

The path slabs looks like the lie on top of the grass. Perhaps sink them a bit further into the ground.

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yehonam Author

Thank you so much loaferslodge for this comment, I shall use this on my next scene, thank you so much! God bless you!